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- Story Listed as: Fiction For Adults
- Theme: Fairy Tales & Fantasy
- Subject: Fairy Tale / Folk Tale
- Published: 09/06/2022
The Five Elements Of Nature
Born 1995, F, from Karnataka, IndiaThe Five Elements Of Nature
Once upon a time there was a beautiful place named Sakar, it was ruled by a wise king Edward, he always wanted to improve his kingdom, and he had dreams to expand his territory and wanted to have the power to overcome his competitors, he tries in all means to fullfil his dream, but both the wealth and power was insufficient. So he goes in search of power .
After few years he returned back to his kingdom with his wife Rose and he had unlimited power (5 elements of the nature - Earth, water, air, fire and space) which made him inevitable (no one can kill him) he can only die when he wishes.
With his unlimited power he built huge palace that could never be destroyed, he attacked his neighbouring kingdom and acquired all the territory.
Using his water power he created lakes, rivers. With power of earth he made the environment green he built many temples, forts etc.
Few years later, they had a son William, who was born with power of fire. He can manipulate the heat , create fire balls ,burn any metal etc.
He was the bravest warrior ever seen, he helped his father to fight his enemies whoever attacked them, but he had one drawback I.e whenever he got angry he couldn't control his powers and his entire body would rage with fire, which lead to destruction sometimes.
Once when William was going for hunting in a forest he was stopped by a snake by saying no human can cross the forest as it was ruled by, king Sapara (king of snake). Anyone who disagree will be killed, hearing this he gets angry and he fights with them, the snakes were no match in front of him,he kills all soldiers.
Finally the king Sapara comes and attacks , he had the power to turn himself in any form of human. And he turns himself in the form of Rose.
But William was smart enough, to identify him and he kills the king by creating fire balls.
As he was returning back he saw a young boy who was crying because he had lost his parents in the war and has nobody to look after William consoles him and asks to come with him to his place and he can stay there, the boy agrees.
They are back to his palace, and he tells everything to his father, he adopts the boy as his son and names him James and grants him with the power of water. With this power he could turn himself into water and could go to any place easily, he could create floods , make it rain, can go anywhere easily and fastly by turning into water.
As they grew up William started understand his powers completely and he tried to help the people in his territory, he created a barricade around the Kingdom so that anyone who tries to come and attack cannot enter.
On other hand James had become a naught boy. He used to misuse his power and tease the common people by doing mischievous things .
Few years passed, it was the day for William to become the next king , because Edward wanted to retire from his post live his life peacefully till the end.
Finally the day had come and everyone were busy with the arrangements, it was raining heavily, floods everywhere and,suddenly there was an attack, Edward's wife Rose was poisoned and she died. William rejects to become the king until he destroy the person who killed his mother.
At that time, James goes to the king Edward and asks that he wants to be the king of Sakar and he is worthy for that position, but Edward doesn't accept because he felt James was not worthy as he did not care about the people of Sakar and he only wanted the throne for his selfishness.
James gets angry he reveals he only killed Rose , he was the son of king Sapara , whom William had killed in the forest and he has come to take revenge, and he turns into snake to bite Edward but William comes and attacks James with fire, but James turns into water and escapes from there. Edward couldn't live without his wife so he decides to end his life and go to heaven before ending his life he tells William his story.
When Edward went in search of powers , he stopped at a lake to drink water he was attacked by a powerful crocodile but he fought with bravery and stabs the crocodile .The crocodile then changes into a beautiful girl , she says she is a princess and was cursed by a sage. She thanks him and introduces herself as Rose. He tells the reason for coming to that place .
She says she knows the place , where he can get powers, she shows him the way ,as per her instructions he came near the temple of Doom and did penance (tapas) for 3 long years, and seeing his dedication, he was granted with the 5 elemental powers of the nature ( i.e air, fire, water and earth and space). He was warned that the powers should not be misused nor should be fallen in the wrong hands.
After that he goes back to Rose he gifts her the power of space (sky) and then he marries her.
With this power she can fly to anyplace .
He came back to his palace with his wife and few years later they had their first child who was a girl they named her Isabella. She was born with the power of air, she could control the wind , create tornadoes etc.
Soon , Edward and Isabella with the help of their powers started raging war with other kingdoms and won . She was very happy that she will be the successor to the throne untill her younger brother William was born, because he would become the future king, she was filled with greed she wanted all the powers for herself she plans to kill her parents and become the Queen of Sakar.
She creates a hurricane with her powers and tries to kill Edward.
But he was more powerful than her, with his power of earth he makes her into a stone and pushes her inside a cave and seals it using his power, and she could only be freed after Edward's death.
Present
After telling his story to William, Edward transfers his powers to William and vanishes into thin air indicating his death.
As soon he dies , Isabella becomes free and comes back to Sakar. She attacks the place by her powers she creates whirlpool everywhere and destroys the place.
William comes and tries to attack her but fails in front of her , he tries to attack her again and again but couldn't stand in front of her as she is much more stronger and powerful than him. She orders him to be imprisoned and she became the queen and started ruling the Kingdom. She was very cruel. People who were against were ordered to kill. The whole kingdom had no choice, they had to listen to her.
William couldn't take this he escapes from the prison. while wandering he remembers his father's story and thinks of going to the temple of Doom to find a solution.
The journey was very hard while going he is stopped by a demon
Who attacks him but William fights back , he cuts the demon's horn.
Finally he reached the temple.
Inside the temple it's very dark he uses his power and lights the place he searches for the answers in the scriptures and finds some mantras , he reads it suddenly a sword appears in front of him ,when he was going to pick the sword, at that time James comes there and they both fight for the sword. Both try to take the sword but they cannot take it.
They both fight for long time , James try to attack by turning into a snake and William gets angry and couldn't control it, his whole body turns into fire he creates a big fire ball and burns the snake.
After killing James he tries to take sword but he hears a voice that , in order to take the sword the person must be worthy.
He remembers the events happened in his life, his father's teaching. He thinks he is ready to sacrifice his life for the sake of his people.
He touches the sword again and a voice appears and says "oh mighty king the sword can be used only once, by stabbing them in the heart ."
He takes the sword, and goes back to Sakar, seeing him back the whole kingdom got hope that now their lives change. They support him and try to attack Isabella but they fail
She says you are no match to me ,she makes a big tornado, where everyone gets gets stuck inside it, including William he then remembers his father's last words,
"You can only achieve it , if you believe it " .
He then uses all elements of nature, he flies and rises above the tornado he takes her to space and attacks her with rocks, and captives her and then he stabs her in the heart and tells" evil will never win".She dies.
He feels sad that he lost his entire family and from now the people of Sakar is his family. And he becomes the new king of Sakar.
The end
Written by,
Poojitha.P
28/9/2020
The Five Elements Of Nature(Poojitha)
The Five Elements Of Nature
Once upon a time there was a beautiful place named Sakar, it was ruled by a wise king Edward, he always wanted to improve his kingdom, and he had dreams to expand his territory and wanted to have the power to overcome his competitors, he tries in all means to fullfil his dream, but both the wealth and power was insufficient. So he goes in search of power .
After few years he returned back to his kingdom with his wife Rose and he had unlimited power (5 elements of the nature - Earth, water, air, fire and space) which made him inevitable (no one can kill him) he can only die when he wishes.
With his unlimited power he built huge palace that could never be destroyed, he attacked his neighbouring kingdom and acquired all the territory.
Using his water power he created lakes, rivers. With power of earth he made the environment green he built many temples, forts etc.
Few years later, they had a son William, who was born with power of fire. He can manipulate the heat , create fire balls ,burn any metal etc.
He was the bravest warrior ever seen, he helped his father to fight his enemies whoever attacked them, but he had one drawback I.e whenever he got angry he couldn't control his powers and his entire body would rage with fire, which lead to destruction sometimes.
Once when William was going for hunting in a forest he was stopped by a snake by saying no human can cross the forest as it was ruled by, king Sapara (king of snake). Anyone who disagree will be killed, hearing this he gets angry and he fights with them, the snakes were no match in front of him,he kills all soldiers.
Finally the king Sapara comes and attacks , he had the power to turn himself in any form of human. And he turns himself in the form of Rose.
But William was smart enough, to identify him and he kills the king by creating fire balls.
As he was returning back he saw a young boy who was crying because he had lost his parents in the war and has nobody to look after William consoles him and asks to come with him to his place and he can stay there, the boy agrees.
They are back to his palace, and he tells everything to his father, he adopts the boy as his son and names him James and grants him with the power of water. With this power he could turn himself into water and could go to any place easily, he could create floods , make it rain, can go anywhere easily and fastly by turning into water.
As they grew up William started understand his powers completely and he tried to help the people in his territory, he created a barricade around the Kingdom so that anyone who tries to come and attack cannot enter.
On other hand James had become a naught boy. He used to misuse his power and tease the common people by doing mischievous things .
Few years passed, it was the day for William to become the next king , because Edward wanted to retire from his post live his life peacefully till the end.
Finally the day had come and everyone were busy with the arrangements, it was raining heavily, floods everywhere and,suddenly there was an attack, Edward's wife Rose was poisoned and she died. William rejects to become the king until he destroy the person who killed his mother.
At that time, James goes to the king Edward and asks that he wants to be the king of Sakar and he is worthy for that position, but Edward doesn't accept because he felt James was not worthy as he did not care about the people of Sakar and he only wanted the throne for his selfishness.
James gets angry he reveals he only killed Rose , he was the son of king Sapara , whom William had killed in the forest and he has come to take revenge, and he turns into snake to bite Edward but William comes and attacks James with fire, but James turns into water and escapes from there. Edward couldn't live without his wife so he decides to end his life and go to heaven before ending his life he tells William his story.
When Edward went in search of powers , he stopped at a lake to drink water he was attacked by a powerful crocodile but he fought with bravery and stabs the crocodile .The crocodile then changes into a beautiful girl , she says she is a princess and was cursed by a sage. She thanks him and introduces herself as Rose. He tells the reason for coming to that place .
She says she knows the place , where he can get powers, she shows him the way ,as per her instructions he came near the temple of Doom and did penance (tapas) for 3 long years, and seeing his dedication, he was granted with the 5 elemental powers of the nature ( i.e air, fire, water and earth and space). He was warned that the powers should not be misused nor should be fallen in the wrong hands.
After that he goes back to Rose he gifts her the power of space (sky) and then he marries her.
With this power she can fly to anyplace .
He came back to his palace with his wife and few years later they had their first child who was a girl they named her Isabella. She was born with the power of air, she could control the wind , create tornadoes etc.
Soon , Edward and Isabella with the help of their powers started raging war with other kingdoms and won . She was very happy that she will be the successor to the throne untill her younger brother William was born, because he would become the future king, she was filled with greed she wanted all the powers for herself she plans to kill her parents and become the Queen of Sakar.
She creates a hurricane with her powers and tries to kill Edward.
But he was more powerful than her, with his power of earth he makes her into a stone and pushes her inside a cave and seals it using his power, and she could only be freed after Edward's death.
Present
After telling his story to William, Edward transfers his powers to William and vanishes into thin air indicating his death.
As soon he dies , Isabella becomes free and comes back to Sakar. She attacks the place by her powers she creates whirlpool everywhere and destroys the place.
William comes and tries to attack her but fails in front of her , he tries to attack her again and again but couldn't stand in front of her as she is much more stronger and powerful than him. She orders him to be imprisoned and she became the queen and started ruling the Kingdom. She was very cruel. People who were against were ordered to kill. The whole kingdom had no choice, they had to listen to her.
William couldn't take this he escapes from the prison. while wandering he remembers his father's story and thinks of going to the temple of Doom to find a solution.
The journey was very hard while going he is stopped by a demon
Who attacks him but William fights back , he cuts the demon's horn.
Finally he reached the temple.
Inside the temple it's very dark he uses his power and lights the place he searches for the answers in the scriptures and finds some mantras , he reads it suddenly a sword appears in front of him ,when he was going to pick the sword, at that time James comes there and they both fight for the sword. Both try to take the sword but they cannot take it.
They both fight for long time , James try to attack by turning into a snake and William gets angry and couldn't control it, his whole body turns into fire he creates a big fire ball and burns the snake.
After killing James he tries to take sword but he hears a voice that , in order to take the sword the person must be worthy.
He remembers the events happened in his life, his father's teaching. He thinks he is ready to sacrifice his life for the sake of his people.
He touches the sword again and a voice appears and says "oh mighty king the sword can be used only once, by stabbing them in the heart ."
He takes the sword, and goes back to Sakar, seeing him back the whole kingdom got hope that now their lives change. They support him and try to attack Isabella but they fail
She says you are no match to me ,she makes a big tornado, where everyone gets gets stuck inside it, including William he then remembers his father's last words,
"You can only achieve it , if you believe it " .
He then uses all elements of nature, he flies and rises above the tornado he takes her to space and attacks her with rocks, and captives her and then he stabs her in the heart and tells" evil will never win".She dies.
He feels sad that he lost his entire family and from now the people of Sakar is his family. And he becomes the new king of Sakar.
The end
Written by,
Poojitha.P
28/9/2020
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