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- Story Listed as: Fiction For Teens
- Theme: Horror
- Subject: Horror / Scary
- Published: 04/26/2021
THE WOODS OF DOOM
Born 1988, M, from ENGLAND, United KingdomTHE WOODS OF DOOM
It was a very cold, starless night.
A very reckless young man was taking on a very daring, foolhardy challenge. He was going to enter the woods of doom – a place from which no one had ever returned.
So the young man walked into the woods, torch in hand, totally ignorant of what he was getting himself into.
He scoffed ironically, unaware that he wasn’t alone in the woods.
As he stomped on with pride, he started seeing movements among the trees in many directions.
Then there came the ferocious roars, the fiendish shrieks, the hisses and the menacing growls.
The man became very afraid. He gazed around and saw many luminous yellow, reptile-like eyes staring menacingly at him.
His fears rose when he saw what were unmistakeably Velociraptors jump down off branches. Others came out from behind bushes. They continued to roar, shriek, growl and hiss, as they slowly approached the man.
The man began to move quicker, but he stumbled into a hollow. He scrambled to his feet, but there was no chance of escape.
The bird-like monsters entered the hollow and slowly approached their victim, like a swarm of zombies and there was nothing the man could do to stop them.
Finally, the monsters went for the ghastly kill.
THE WOODS OF DOOM(BEN BROWN)
THE WOODS OF DOOM
It was a very cold, starless night.
A very reckless young man was taking on a very daring, foolhardy challenge. He was going to enter the woods of doom – a place from which no one had ever returned.
So the young man walked into the woods, torch in hand, totally ignorant of what he was getting himself into.
He scoffed ironically, unaware that he wasn’t alone in the woods.
As he stomped on with pride, he started seeing movements among the trees in many directions.
Then there came the ferocious roars, the fiendish shrieks, the hisses and the menacing growls.
The man became very afraid. He gazed around and saw many luminous yellow, reptile-like eyes staring menacingly at him.
His fears rose when he saw what were unmistakeably Velociraptors jump down off branches. Others came out from behind bushes. They continued to roar, shriek, growl and hiss, as they slowly approached the man.
The man began to move quicker, but he stumbled into a hollow. He scrambled to his feet, but there was no chance of escape.
The bird-like monsters entered the hollow and slowly approached their victim, like a swarm of zombies and there was nothing the man could do to stop them.
Finally, the monsters went for the ghastly kill.
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BEN BROWN
05/25/2021Ben Brown
Thank you for complimenting me on my story.
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Roy Brown
05/08/2021Ben, certainly a different and unusual slant on. 'if you go down to the woods'. !!
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BEN BROWN
05/05/2021BEN BROWN
Thank you for complimenting me on my story.
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Radrook
04/28/2021If nobody had ever returned from thiose woods, and he knew it, then why was he not afraid?
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Radrook
04/29/2021So he didn't believe they were telling him the truth? Or was his overconfidence because he was armed with some type of weapon that he felt made the threats manageable?
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BEN BROWN
04/28/2021He wasn't afraid because, he was too overconfident. He wanted to be the only one to return from the woods.
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Gail Moore
04/27/2021Very creepy piece, I shall be thinking this next time I go for a walk through the greenbelt.
Well done :-)
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BEN BROWN
04/28/2021Thank's for complimenting me on my story. I got my idea from The Wind In The Willows when mole goes into the wildwood. I decided to use Velociraptors instead of weasels.
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