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- Story Listed as: Fiction For Adults
- Theme: Family & Friends
- Subject: Love / Romance / Dating
- Published: 01/21/2021
Him & Her
Born 2005, F, from GUJARAT, India"Because.. I-I.. L-love you-uu"
"I love you too,"
He thought these same words if said earlier would have saved her.
(REWIND... START OF THE STORY)
Anaya was just scrolling her Instagram, looking at the memes, and laughing when she got notified, "A new follow request". She quickly saw who it was.. "itz_vinay01". The moment she accepted the follow request, a new notification caught her eyes.. It was Vinay who had written "Hey.. This is Vinay".. Inaya smiled and texted back, "Oh yeah I know Itz Vinay numbered 01"... He giggled through the emoticons.
Gradually they had started talking almost every day. The girl who always laughed on memes was now laughing at his stupid jokes. The boy who always played games was now busy chatting every day. They could talk for hours on calls and still couldn't get bored. Both of them shared every little thing with each other. By the time, they had become best friends. Not a single negative thought ran in their mind however the destiny had different plans for them.
One day, the boy did not answer any call or replied to any text. Inaya was worried, somewhere in her mind she knew that something's not right. Millions of thoughts were flashing in her mind. She waited for two days, though.
Those two days were filled with terror for her. She could do nothing but sit alone, cry hard and wait for a reply. After two days. the morning when she woke up, she found a text message from Vinay. It was:
"Hey. Sorry I was busy for the past 2-3 days and so could not contact you. All I want to say is we need to stop talking now. Don't ask me the reason. I just don't feel like talking to you now. Sorry, Bye"
The whole world turned upside down for her. She was not convinced at the thought of living without him. She screamed at the top of her voice in order to alleviate all the pain inside her however she could not heal her little broken heart. After all, Vinay was too good to leave her. Inaya mustered up some courage and called him.
"Hello?"
"Hey. why are you calling me?"
"I saw your text but you need to tell me what made you take this decision out of nowhere?"
"I don't know"
"Are you alright, Vinay?"
Before Inaya could ask any other question. Vinay hung up the phone.
Inaya's state of mind was getting worse and worse. She had to calm all the passion in her and in order to do that, she left the house with a note. "Mum, I am sorry for leaving the house suddenly but I am not feeling well. I'll return home as soon as I feel better"
Few hours passed...
Vinay received a call from an unknown number...
"Hello?"
"Hello? Can I speak to Vinay?"
"Speaking, who's this?"
"This is Inaya's mom".. she said while sobbing bitterly
"Is she okay? Why are you crying?"
"Inaya left the house a few hours back saying that she would return when she feels better. But amidst, she met with an accident. She's in the city hospital - ward number-7. My child is repeating your name. Please come here, she needs you"
Vinay rushed to the hospital. She opened her eyes with Vinay's name
He took her hand and said,
"I am so sorry. It's all my fault. I should have told you everything just like how we shared all those little things. But, I promise you I'll tell you everything once you get better"
"I won't get better.."
"No don't say that.. please"
"Just tell me, why did you do it?"
"Inaya, I got diagnosed with pulmonary fibrosis and doctors say that I can die anytime. I distanced myself from you so that if any day I leave this world then you live your life peacefully.I didn't want you to be worried. I always want your happiness. I did that because...I-I... L-love you-uu"
"I love you too"
Having said these last words, her heart stopped working.
Exactly 10 minutes later, Vinay got a heart attack also known as stress cardiomyopathy. This rare heart attack is caused by sudden emotional stress or a prolonged disease in the body.
(The only reason to narrate this story is to make everyone understand that you never know what happens in your life... if you love somebody.. go tell them... life is too short to hide your feelings... dear readers.. thank you for reading and do tell me in comments how you liked them)
Him & Her(MAYRA)
"Because.. I-I.. L-love you-uu"
"I love you too,"
He thought these same words if said earlier would have saved her.
(REWIND... START OF THE STORY)
Anaya was just scrolling her Instagram, looking at the memes, and laughing when she got notified, "A new follow request". She quickly saw who it was.. "itz_vinay01". The moment she accepted the follow request, a new notification caught her eyes.. It was Vinay who had written "Hey.. This is Vinay".. Inaya smiled and texted back, "Oh yeah I know Itz Vinay numbered 01"... He giggled through the emoticons.
Gradually they had started talking almost every day. The girl who always laughed on memes was now laughing at his stupid jokes. The boy who always played games was now busy chatting every day. They could talk for hours on calls and still couldn't get bored. Both of them shared every little thing with each other. By the time, they had become best friends. Not a single negative thought ran in their mind however the destiny had different plans for them.
One day, the boy did not answer any call or replied to any text. Inaya was worried, somewhere in her mind she knew that something's not right. Millions of thoughts were flashing in her mind. She waited for two days, though.
Those two days were filled with terror for her. She could do nothing but sit alone, cry hard and wait for a reply. After two days. the morning when she woke up, she found a text message from Vinay. It was:
"Hey. Sorry I was busy for the past 2-3 days and so could not contact you. All I want to say is we need to stop talking now. Don't ask me the reason. I just don't feel like talking to you now. Sorry, Bye"
The whole world turned upside down for her. She was not convinced at the thought of living without him. She screamed at the top of her voice in order to alleviate all the pain inside her however she could not heal her little broken heart. After all, Vinay was too good to leave her. Inaya mustered up some courage and called him.
"Hello?"
"Hey. why are you calling me?"
"I saw your text but you need to tell me what made you take this decision out of nowhere?"
"I don't know"
"Are you alright, Vinay?"
Before Inaya could ask any other question. Vinay hung up the phone.
Inaya's state of mind was getting worse and worse. She had to calm all the passion in her and in order to do that, she left the house with a note. "Mum, I am sorry for leaving the house suddenly but I am not feeling well. I'll return home as soon as I feel better"
Few hours passed...
Vinay received a call from an unknown number...
"Hello?"
"Hello? Can I speak to Vinay?"
"Speaking, who's this?"
"This is Inaya's mom".. she said while sobbing bitterly
"Is she okay? Why are you crying?"
"Inaya left the house a few hours back saying that she would return when she feels better. But amidst, she met with an accident. She's in the city hospital - ward number-7. My child is repeating your name. Please come here, she needs you"
Vinay rushed to the hospital. She opened her eyes with Vinay's name
He took her hand and said,
"I am so sorry. It's all my fault. I should have told you everything just like how we shared all those little things. But, I promise you I'll tell you everything once you get better"
"I won't get better.."
"No don't say that.. please"
"Just tell me, why did you do it?"
"Inaya, I got diagnosed with pulmonary fibrosis and doctors say that I can die anytime. I distanced myself from you so that if any day I leave this world then you live your life peacefully.I didn't want you to be worried. I always want your happiness. I did that because...I-I... L-love you-uu"
"I love you too"
Having said these last words, her heart stopped working.
Exactly 10 minutes later, Vinay got a heart attack also known as stress cardiomyopathy. This rare heart attack is caused by sudden emotional stress or a prolonged disease in the body.
(The only reason to narrate this story is to make everyone understand that you never know what happens in your life... if you love somebody.. go tell them... life is too short to hide your feelings... dear readers.. thank you for reading and do tell me in comments how you liked them)
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01/22/2021This sad ending was just to deliver a good message! I am sorry Gail as that might have disappointed you!
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