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- Story Listed as: Fiction For Kids
- Theme: Inspirational
- Subject: Friends / Friendship
- Published: 12/21/2020
the heavens part 1
Born 2011, F, from MINDEN, United StatesI woke up thinking get up! But something in my body just didn’t listen I thought what is happening? Then I tried to blubber a word but all I could hear was a heavenly sound that put me into deep thoughts. Nothing was rushing in my head as in usual mornings no yelling just calm noises, good thoughts and chill life… LIFE! What was in my life where was I? The thoughts came rushing in like a cheetah but then I saw a beautiful, light gold and bright! I saw a man that I couldn’t describe! He was very heavenly though… he came close and said hello, I am Jesus. Where am I? I asked. The man responded, you are in heaven. I was shocked by this news… what?! I said. The man answered be calm I shall take you. Where!? I yelled. To God the man answered. I was silent, once I saw the door beautiful doves started flying, I started to understand…. JESUS WAS BEHIND ME!!!!!! The golden door opened God was there, I sat down and yelled oh my god oh sorry is that offensive? Shoot… first time I see God and I messed it up, Shoot! Then God responded hello my friend…
the heavens part 1(Sofia H) I woke up thinking get up! But something in my body just didn’t listen I thought what is happening? Then I tried to blubber a word but all I could hear was a heavenly sound that put me into deep thoughts. Nothing was rushing in my head as in usual mornings no yelling just calm noises, good thoughts and chill life… LIFE! What was in my life where was I? The thoughts came rushing in like a cheetah but then I saw a beautiful, light gold and bright! I saw a man that I couldn’t describe! He was very heavenly though… he came close and said hello, I am Jesus. Where am I? I asked. The man responded, you are in heaven. I was shocked by this news… what?! I said. The man answered be calm I shall take you. Where!? I yelled. To God the man answered. I was silent, once I saw the door beautiful doves started flying, I started to understand…. JESUS WAS BEHIND ME!!!!!! The golden door opened God was there, I sat down and yelled oh my god oh sorry is that offensive? Shoot… first time I see God and I messed it up, Shoot! Then God responded hello my friend…
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