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- Story Listed as: Fiction For Teens
- Theme: Horror
- Subject: Creatures & Monsters
- Published: 07/15/2020
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a man wakes up from a nap, he hears his wife singing go to sleep to his baby. He chuckles, but then his wife comes in with the shopping. He hears a scream come from the baby's room.
go to sleep(thestorytelleralf) a man wakes up from a nap, he hears his wife singing go to sleep to his baby. He chuckles, but then his wife comes in with the shopping. He hears a scream come from the baby's room.
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JD
07/16/2020This isn't really a story, Alf. But your three short sentences are pretty well written for someone your age, so I think it is a good start to becoming a better writer of an actual story. Hopefully your next story will be a real story. Thanks
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JD
07/21/2020Sorry, Juliet. This is NOT "literature".
However, it is a good three sentences for someone who is just beginning to write. And these sentences do tell a story in a very minimalistic sense. Especially for the Twitter crowd who like their fiction really SHORT.
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Juliet Buckholdt
07/21/2020dude. this is a real story. you just dont get it. come back when you understand literature, jd. love you
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