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- Story Listed as: Fiction For Teens
- Theme: Horror
- Subject: Horror / Scary
- Published: 06/10/2020
abandoned hills
Born 2004, F, from Ajmer / rajasthan, India![Abandoned hills](/storage/story/72913125-A394-798B-DF7C-FF5F845DC454_1591806945-image(161x285-crop).jpeg)
Today I and rose decided to go to the abandoned hills, quite near our homes. The sky is grey and wind is rough today. As we came to our spot. We clicked pictures, enjoyed the nature, had our food and when it grew dark, we rested a bit.
After resting about an hour. “Rose! Let’s go, to up there, there are many tress and creatures” I said pointing to the upper part of the hill. “It will be fun, lets go” rosé said excitedly.
As we reached to a point, we saw lichens and fungus. “So this is what madam gaz told us ‘bout yesterday” rose said pointing to group of lichens. “See! I found red mushrooms, they look pretty but they are deadly poisons” I said. “Wow they are pretty I can use them “rose exclaimed. I looked at her in confusion; she looked at me back, after half a minute of eye contact we laughed hard. “Oh rose you are so...”I immediately stopped when I saw a hand on the ground, coming out from a trunk.
I screamed. “Hey! What happened?”rose asked. “See there a-a I-it is a DEAD BODY!” “Rose look it’s a dead body, we should go back home, no we should call police” I was deadly scared.
Rose came forward “it’s strange” rose said. “Strange?”I said. “Yes, it’s strange because I remember putting two in there yesterday”.
abandoned hills(Chaitali)
Today I and rose decided to go to the abandoned hills, quite near our homes. The sky is grey and wind is rough today. As we came to our spot. We clicked pictures, enjoyed the nature, had our food and when it grew dark, we rested a bit.
After resting about an hour. “Rose! Let’s go, to up there, there are many tress and creatures” I said pointing to the upper part of the hill. “It will be fun, lets go” rosé said excitedly.
As we reached to a point, we saw lichens and fungus. “So this is what madam gaz told us ‘bout yesterday” rose said pointing to group of lichens. “See! I found red mushrooms, they look pretty but they are deadly poisons” I said. “Wow they are pretty I can use them “rose exclaimed. I looked at her in confusion; she looked at me back, after half a minute of eye contact we laughed hard. “Oh rose you are so...”I immediately stopped when I saw a hand on the ground, coming out from a trunk.
I screamed. “Hey! What happened?”rose asked. “See there a-a I-it is a DEAD BODY!” “Rose look it’s a dead body, we should go back home, no we should call police” I was deadly scared.
Rose came forward “it’s strange” rose said. “Strange?”I said. “Yes, it’s strange because I remember putting two in there yesterday”.
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Pratik
06/14/2020You know I think these two stories were better than the last ones. Hmmm... it maybe because I like horror stories.
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Chaitali
06/15/2020Honestly Pratik , i find my stories cool in their own way , and actually i'm on the edge of my life making years , and so story writing is my hobby and my top priority list is different . whenever i wrote a story: i get an idea to write about, i write and update it as soon as possible . I'm still learning and discovering , i really dont care about rating and being story star of the day ( i haven't been either) i just wait for suggestions from people about my story , so that i can improve more. if ill loose my mind one day (im lucky i haven't till now . hehehe) i would have left story star . but i dont want to because i love it , i love reading stories here more than writing my own .
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Hafsa bint-e-rashid
06/11/2020And i like the way the girl rose shows her reaction cuz i find her kinda like me ;)
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Hafsa bint-e-rashid
06/11/2020I was quite up for reading this story and honestly i enjoyed doing so , especially the part when they discover a dead body...
maybe rechecking the typed version of your writings in the end will benefit you..
Best wishes...
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Chaitali
06/11/2020thanks Hafsa for reading it , glad to know you enjoyed it :)
thank you very much for your suggestions.
----cheers;)
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