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- Story Listed as: Fiction For Adults
- Theme: Family & Friends
- Subject: Poems & Songs
- Published: 06/14/2019
Every Step Says To Me From Promise Me
Born 1993, M, from Hyderabad, IndiaEvery Steps Says To Me
Every Sip Reminds Me & Ask Me..
The Shade Of Past Surrounds Me
Spread In the Air & Praise Me
And Also Says Me...
Were You Were So Long...
Why You Were So Harm...
And Promise Me That you Never Live Me So Long.
Today I Promise You that,
I Never Live You Back
Unless I close My Eyes
Or Else The Angle Takes My Life...
Every Step,Every Sip Come on with Me
& Promise Me...
From Story Promise Me
A Story By Mohd Moiz
Every Step Says To Me From Promise Me(Mohd Moizuddin)
Every Steps Says To Me
Every Sip Reminds Me & Ask Me..
The Shade Of Past Surrounds Me
Spread In the Air & Praise Me
And Also Says Me...
Were You Were So Long...
Why You Were So Harm...
And Promise Me That you Never Live Me So Long.
Today I Promise You that,
I Never Live You Back
Unless I close My Eyes
Or Else The Angle Takes My Life...
Every Step,Every Sip Come on with Me
& Promise Me...
From Story Promise Me
A Story By Mohd Moiz
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JD
06/15/2019Mohd, I think that your poetry suffers from a language barrier. In your own language I'm sure the poem is beautiful, but it does not translate into English well. Many of your words do not make sense in English, and therefore your poem suffers due to lack of reader understanding about your meaning.
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