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- Story Listed as: Fiction For Kids
- Theme: Fairy Tales & Fantasy
- Subject: Action
- Published: 05/18/2019
A Fun Birthday
Born 2010, F, from Beaverton, United States“Whee!” I was sliding down a water slide into a giant pool of candy. It was a big party for my birthday, and all my friends were there with me swimming in the big pool of candy. The candies had many different bright colors, like light blue, green, purple, pink and lots more. The candy was very big. It was about the size of a fist. I saw some of my friends munching on candies. The candies were solid, so we didn't need swim suits yet.
It was hot and we were sweating so we went to get ice cream. We all got two scoops of ice cream.
After we got cooled off we went back into the pool, but some of us stayed up to relax in the sun.
Soon every kid was back in the pool. Some of the grownups were still up on beach chairs chatting with other grownups, but some grownups were in the pool, helping the younger kids. Some kids were throwing pieces of candy at each other and trying to dodge them. The pool of candy wasn't that deep, so an eight year old could reach the bottom on tippy toes.
It was time for the cake. Everyone got out of the pool. We sang the birthday song and each got a slice of cake. It was chocolate cake.
After the cake, some parents got up to either put more sunscreen on the kids, or told the kids to drink water.
Then it was time for lunch so we had lunch at a building with brick walls. It was a very neat restaurant. We all ate quickly, eager to go back outside.
After we were all finished, we went back outside. There were two pools. One full of candy, which we just had swam in, and one filled with chocolate milk. So the kids all changed into swimming suits and put on goggles and brought floats.
When everyone was done putting on the swimming gear, we all jumped into the pool. Everyone started splashing the chocolate milk on each other and swimming around. The chocolate milk was cool, and it was hot outside the swimming pool, so almost everyone was swimming in the chocolate milk. Some kids brought in cups so they could drink some of the chocolate milk in the pool. They knew they could just scoop up some of the milk, and drink it from the cup.
Soon, people were brown from the milk, and their hair was very sticky. People were dripping with milk. They were drying off with towels, and changing back into their clothes in bathrooms. It was time to go home.
It was a fun dream. I hope I could have another dream just as fun as this one.
A Fun Birthday(Audrey Chu)
“Whee!” I was sliding down a water slide into a giant pool of candy. It was a big party for my birthday, and all my friends were there with me swimming in the big pool of candy. The candies had many different bright colors, like light blue, green, purple, pink and lots more. The candy was very big. It was about the size of a fist. I saw some of my friends munching on candies. The candies were solid, so we didn't need swim suits yet.
It was hot and we were sweating so we went to get ice cream. We all got two scoops of ice cream.
After we got cooled off we went back into the pool, but some of us stayed up to relax in the sun.
Soon every kid was back in the pool. Some of the grownups were still up on beach chairs chatting with other grownups, but some grownups were in the pool, helping the younger kids. Some kids were throwing pieces of candy at each other and trying to dodge them. The pool of candy wasn't that deep, so an eight year old could reach the bottom on tippy toes.
It was time for the cake. Everyone got out of the pool. We sang the birthday song and each got a slice of cake. It was chocolate cake.
After the cake, some parents got up to either put more sunscreen on the kids, or told the kids to drink water.
Then it was time for lunch so we had lunch at a building with brick walls. It was a very neat restaurant. We all ate quickly, eager to go back outside.
After we were all finished, we went back outside. There were two pools. One full of candy, which we just had swam in, and one filled with chocolate milk. So the kids all changed into swimming suits and put on goggles and brought floats.
When everyone was done putting on the swimming gear, we all jumped into the pool. Everyone started splashing the chocolate milk on each other and swimming around. The chocolate milk was cool, and it was hot outside the swimming pool, so almost everyone was swimming in the chocolate milk. Some kids brought in cups so they could drink some of the chocolate milk in the pool. They knew they could just scoop up some of the milk, and drink it from the cup.
Soon, people were brown from the milk, and their hair was very sticky. People were dripping with milk. They were drying off with towels, and changing back into their clothes in bathrooms. It was time to go home.
It was a fun dream. I hope I could have another dream just as fun as this one.
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JD
05/18/2019That sounds like a very funny dream indeed. I think you have to be a big lover of candy and chocolate milk in order to dream about swimming in it on your birthday, Audrey! For me... that doesn't sound like something I would want to do, but probably other kids would really think it is a cool idea and that it would be a lot of fun. It was fun to read your story about it, so thanks for sharing it on Storystar! : )
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