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- Story Listed as: True Life For Teens
- Theme: Family & Friends
- Subject: Poems & Songs
- Published: 04/13/2019
Don't Worry
Born 2003, F, from Clinton, Mississippi, United StatesHold me
Till I fall asleep
Im feeling kinda lonely
Without you
Take me
to your deepest memories
I wanna see everything
I did with you
I just need a way to stop this pain
All these feelings that I can’t contain
In a world where nothings ever okay
Please just take it all away
Ive been holding my breath
Breathe in and out count to ten
The stress is overwhelming
But I guess its just all in my head
It gets really hard at night
i like to close my eyes
and tell myself I’m strong
Cause ive gone one more day without you
I just need a way to stop this pain
All these feelings that I can’t contain
In a world where nothings ever okay
Please just take it all away
Ive been holding my breath
Breathe in and out count to ten
The stress is overwhelming
But I guess its just all in my head
The last thing I remember
Was laying next to you
Holding my hand you said to me...
Don't worry
I'll hold you
until you fall asleep
when you're feeling lonely
I'll always be with you…
Don't worry
Don't Worry(Thacker)
Hold me
Till I fall asleep
Im feeling kinda lonely
Without you
Take me
to your deepest memories
I wanna see everything
I did with you
I just need a way to stop this pain
All these feelings that I can’t contain
In a world where nothings ever okay
Please just take it all away
Ive been holding my breath
Breathe in and out count to ten
The stress is overwhelming
But I guess its just all in my head
It gets really hard at night
i like to close my eyes
and tell myself I’m strong
Cause ive gone one more day without you
I just need a way to stop this pain
All these feelings that I can’t contain
In a world where nothings ever okay
Please just take it all away
Ive been holding my breath
Breathe in and out count to ten
The stress is overwhelming
But I guess its just all in my head
The last thing I remember
Was laying next to you
Holding my hand you said to me...
Don't worry
I'll hold you
until you fall asleep
when you're feeling lonely
I'll always be with you…
Don't worry
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Help Us Understand What's Happening
JD
05/15/2019We all need someone to hold us and tell us everything will be okay, don't worry. I'm glad you had such a person in your life, Thacker. Thank you for sharing your story poem on Storystar, and congratulations on being selected as one of the Short Story STARS of the Week! : )
ReplyHelp Us Understand What's Happening
Kevin Hughes
04/13/2019Thacker,
Your writings are dominated by four emotions: Love, Hate, Anger and Sadness. You need all of those to navigate through life, but right now it seems they are out of balance. First, make sure to take care of yourself- that is almost always the hardest person to forgive...and strangely enough- to love. Second, do something besides think...mow the grass, lift weights, mop the floor, chop wood- dance till you drop.
Anything physical that takes your mind of off you for a while.
Then, just as your story/poem says, make it one more day. A lot of us do that---and it helps.
Smiles, Kevin
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