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- Story Listed as: Fiction For Kids
- Theme: Action & Adventure
- Subject: Adventure
- Published: 12/03/2018
The Ice Monster Named Redigo
By Hugh Rogers
It was just an ordinary day after school. The sun was shining brightly into Jack Wilson's bedroom while he was busy watching Murray Street Productions. M.S.P was Jack’s favourite T.V show. During the program, a mysterious death happened at school and they are trying to find the murderer. Jack got a bit annoyed when the same ad kept coming on with a yeti named Redigo trying to sell snow cones to kids.
Meanwhile, Jack's Dad Fredrick is out doing a job for a friend. Fredrick was busy installing some downlights into their shed.
Jack yelled at the TV “Nobody likes you or your snow cones Redigo”
“Take that back” argued the Yeti.
Jack looked around the room frantically wondering who had spoken. He then looked back at the TV.
“TAKE THAT BACK,” yelled Redigo.
“NO, I WILL NEVER BUY YOUR SNOW CONES,” screeched Jack.
Everything went silent. Jack suddenly felt weird.
“What is happening?” Jack said anxiously to himself… then there were rumbles and roars.
“Arggghhhhhh” Jack screamed at the top of his lungs.
Then there was a waterfall of whooshing air and he got sucked into the TV. Jack saw a massive purple cube that glowed brightly in the darkness, as he was floating towards the big lump of purpleness he noticed on top of it there was a strong heroic knight. Jack then fell out of the air. He stood up, brushed off his knees and adjusted his shirt.
“Jack Wilson follow me, you have some apologies to make.” Preached the courageous knight.
“Oh well ok …… I didn’t quite catch your name, Sir.” Jack asked, “Also where the heck am I and Why?”
“Shh not too many questions, we're nearly here."
“Who goes there?" Redigo questioned sitting in a large golden throne.
“It’s Jack Wilson coming to apologize sir” exclaimed the courageous knight.
“proceed,” said Redigo
Jack apologized “I’m super sorry I yelled at you and don’t like your adverts I won’t do it again I promise.”
“Now, you have to do something for me.”
“Anything for putting me back into my bedroom.”
“You my friend have to get people to watch my adverts.”
“is that it" Jack laughed and giggled for 2 minutes straight then finally said “So you want me…to get people…. To watch your adverts.”
“Argh yep” Redigo regrated.
“Can I come to your house and we could do some work on it there?”
”Yes of course and we could work on my computer” said Redigo.
“good stuff, let’s get to work”
Redigo then sucked in a big breath of air then let it out “ahh-phew”
His breath was frozen and blue, and I couldn’t see, next minute I was in Redigo’s house.
“Wow you can teleport me” Jack said in excitement. “I’m not very good with computer so can’t you just do it, please just disappear and say you can learn how to teleport if you buy a snow cone”
“Great idea you’re the best” said Redigo.
So, Redigo made Jack magically appear back in his house and Jack texted all his friends that they can learn to teleport if they watch this advert. So, the next day in the morning the advert was on and all the kids were watching, and it turns out nobody can teleport, but he made a few more sales in the snow cones. And Jack was never bothered by any monsters ever again and he lived happily ever after.
THE ICE MONSTER(HUGH)
The Ice Monster Named Redigo
By Hugh Rogers
It was just an ordinary day after school. The sun was shining brightly into Jack Wilson's bedroom while he was busy watching Murray Street Productions. M.S.P was Jack’s favourite T.V show. During the program, a mysterious death happened at school and they are trying to find the murderer. Jack got a bit annoyed when the same ad kept coming on with a yeti named Redigo trying to sell snow cones to kids.
Meanwhile, Jack's Dad Fredrick is out doing a job for a friend. Fredrick was busy installing some downlights into their shed.
Jack yelled at the TV “Nobody likes you or your snow cones Redigo”
“Take that back” argued the Yeti.
Jack looked around the room frantically wondering who had spoken. He then looked back at the TV.
“TAKE THAT BACK,” yelled Redigo.
“NO, I WILL NEVER BUY YOUR SNOW CONES,” screeched Jack.
Everything went silent. Jack suddenly felt weird.
“What is happening?” Jack said anxiously to himself… then there were rumbles and roars.
“Arggghhhhhh” Jack screamed at the top of his lungs.
Then there was a waterfall of whooshing air and he got sucked into the TV. Jack saw a massive purple cube that glowed brightly in the darkness, as he was floating towards the big lump of purpleness he noticed on top of it there was a strong heroic knight. Jack then fell out of the air. He stood up, brushed off his knees and adjusted his shirt.
“Jack Wilson follow me, you have some apologies to make.” Preached the courageous knight.
“Oh well ok …… I didn’t quite catch your name, Sir.” Jack asked, “Also where the heck am I and Why?”
“Shh not too many questions, we're nearly here."
“Who goes there?" Redigo questioned sitting in a large golden throne.
“It’s Jack Wilson coming to apologize sir” exclaimed the courageous knight.
“proceed,” said Redigo
Jack apologized “I’m super sorry I yelled at you and don’t like your adverts I won’t do it again I promise.”
“Now, you have to do something for me.”
“Anything for putting me back into my bedroom.”
“You my friend have to get people to watch my adverts.”
“is that it" Jack laughed and giggled for 2 minutes straight then finally said “So you want me…to get people…. To watch your adverts.”
“Argh yep” Redigo regrated.
“Can I come to your house and we could do some work on it there?”
”Yes of course and we could work on my computer” said Redigo.
“good stuff, let’s get to work”
Redigo then sucked in a big breath of air then let it out “ahh-phew”
His breath was frozen and blue, and I couldn’t see, next minute I was in Redigo’s house.
“Wow you can teleport me” Jack said in excitement. “I’m not very good with computer so can’t you just do it, please just disappear and say you can learn how to teleport if you buy a snow cone”
“Great idea you’re the best” said Redigo.
So, Redigo made Jack magically appear back in his house and Jack texted all his friends that they can learn to teleport if they watch this advert. So, the next day in the morning the advert was on and all the kids were watching, and it turns out nobody can teleport, but he made a few more sales in the snow cones. And Jack was never bothered by any monsters ever again and he lived happily ever after.
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