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- Story Listed as: Fiction For Kids
- Theme: Fairy Tales & Fantasy
- Subject: Creatures & Monsters
- Published: 09/22/2018
“Kevin, help me, I’m going to die in this thing” I yelled.
“I’m coming, just give me a few more seconds, I’m coming sis,” my brother called back.
But the elevator was more than I could bear. The stench of sweat and the humid air made me ill. Stay awake, stay awake, no fainting allowed, I told myself again and again. But this elevator was too much for me. Think about cute little kitty cats, or anything other than this, I told myself. But I just couldn’t do it, and everything went black.
“Catherine,” I shouted. “Catherine!” I screamed as loud as my voice could go. My sister was on the floor of the elevator, motionless, unmoving, as if she was dead. I ran across the elevator as fast as I could to press the emergency bell, slamming my head into the wall as I went for it. I slumped on the ground, muscles sore, unable to move anymore.
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“HO HO HO!” I yelled. “Someone is stuck in the elevator again!” I looked at the security camera, there were 2 children, by themselves, already unconscious! YuMmY! I could have tender child chops tonight for dinner! I thought, my mouth watering.
“I get vun and you get vun if I get zee children?” my co-worker asked.
“Ok,” I answered. “But hurry, for I have work for you to do!”
“2 vittle children, coming right up!” he answered and rushed out the door.
10 minutes later, my co-worker was back from the elevator holding one child in each hand.
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I woke up in pain. Someone was holding me by my shirt! I ached all over. What was going on? I wondered. I looked around, I was in a office, one that looked fairly normal, until I saw the people inside it. The “man” or monster that was sitting on the chair was green and had one creepy eye. Then, I looked up at the “person” that was holding me. It was a wolf with human-like arms and legs, but it was still a wolf.
I screamed. So loud that even the green eyed freak jumped. The wolf dropped me and my brother, who was still unmoving. I grabbed my brother by his arm and dragged him out of the room. An alarm started going off. I shook my brother awake. “Run!” I screamed at him. He opened one eye, half awake, but did what was commanded, and we ran and ran. Away from that scary elevator that caused this, away from those creepy monsters, away from the too normal office.
The Elevator(Anya)
“Kevin, help me, I’m going to die in this thing” I yelled.
“I’m coming, just give me a few more seconds, I’m coming sis,” my brother called back.
But the elevator was more than I could bear. The stench of sweat and the humid air made me ill. Stay awake, stay awake, no fainting allowed, I told myself again and again. But this elevator was too much for me. Think about cute little kitty cats, or anything other than this, I told myself. But I just couldn’t do it, and everything went black.
“Catherine,” I shouted. “Catherine!” I screamed as loud as my voice could go. My sister was on the floor of the elevator, motionless, unmoving, as if she was dead. I ran across the elevator as fast as I could to press the emergency bell, slamming my head into the wall as I went for it. I slumped on the ground, muscles sore, unable to move anymore.
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“HO HO HO!” I yelled. “Someone is stuck in the elevator again!” I looked at the security camera, there were 2 children, by themselves, already unconscious! YuMmY! I could have tender child chops tonight for dinner! I thought, my mouth watering.
“I get vun and you get vun if I get zee children?” my co-worker asked.
“Ok,” I answered. “But hurry, for I have work for you to do!”
“2 vittle children, coming right up!” he answered and rushed out the door.
10 minutes later, my co-worker was back from the elevator holding one child in each hand.
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I woke up in pain. Someone was holding me by my shirt! I ached all over. What was going on? I wondered. I looked around, I was in a office, one that looked fairly normal, until I saw the people inside it. The “man” or monster that was sitting on the chair was green and had one creepy eye. Then, I looked up at the “person” that was holding me. It was a wolf with human-like arms and legs, but it was still a wolf.
I screamed. So loud that even the green eyed freak jumped. The wolf dropped me and my brother, who was still unmoving. I grabbed my brother by his arm and dragged him out of the room. An alarm started going off. I shook my brother awake. “Run!” I screamed at him. He opened one eye, half awake, but did what was commanded, and we ran and ran. Away from that scary elevator that caused this, away from those creepy monsters, away from the too normal office.
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Kevin Hughes
08/05/2019Way to go Anya,
You drew the reader in right away...and we rushed through the story as quickly as the characters in it did. You earned the Story Star Award...good on you!
Smiles, Kevin
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