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- Story Listed as: Fiction For Teens
- Theme: Science Fiction
- Subject: War & Peace
- Published: 07/13/2018
The I'llama'nati
Born 2006, F, from West Midlands, United KingdomThe I’llama’nati
Mechanically, in unanimity, a blanket of wool camouflaged the Earth. Although previously non-belligerent for the aforementioned two generations, prior to this, tempestuous, plague-ridden war had now broken out. Death. Destruction. Domination. The cause? Interspecies skirmish. Interspecies bloodshed. Interspecies umbrage. Interspecies animosity.
3049 AD
Only few humans remain. Lurking within the carcinogenic shadows, the annihilation of humanity has led to mutilation… magicians vagabond over the corpses of previous lifeforms.
Decayed with dust and age, these skeletons… these guardians of the streets, were once victims of the Eleorian Genocide; this citadel was founded upon the tenets of hope and peace, yet bombarded with heinousnesses… schlepped to the streets by the despicable llamas. No one was spared. No child slept safe at night. Lasting for an indescribable amount of time, the incomprehensible effects of the primitive, pugnacious warfare deformed the land.
War was all humans knew. Violence was the answer.
‘Sir, the troops have been gathered!’ bleated the general. ‘For too long have these loitering civilians disrupted our plans of world despotism. For too long have these rootless nomads stolen our entertainment… our pets, the humans.’
‘It’s time to act… and act we will.’
A rambunctious explosion ran through the hearts of the nearby prestidigitators. Shockwaves surged through the dilapidated city. Any remaining humans were immediately vitiated. Time slowed down. From the pinnacle of the golden fortress, hysterical susurrations drifted to the demising corpses.
The battle was over.
The llamas had won.
The I'llama'nati(Alice Lewis)
The I’llama’nati
Mechanically, in unanimity, a blanket of wool camouflaged the Earth. Although previously non-belligerent for the aforementioned two generations, prior to this, tempestuous, plague-ridden war had now broken out. Death. Destruction. Domination. The cause? Interspecies skirmish. Interspecies bloodshed. Interspecies umbrage. Interspecies animosity.
3049 AD
Only few humans remain. Lurking within the carcinogenic shadows, the annihilation of humanity has led to mutilation… magicians vagabond over the corpses of previous lifeforms.
Decayed with dust and age, these skeletons… these guardians of the streets, were once victims of the Eleorian Genocide; this citadel was founded upon the tenets of hope and peace, yet bombarded with heinousnesses… schlepped to the streets by the despicable llamas. No one was spared. No child slept safe at night. Lasting for an indescribable amount of time, the incomprehensible effects of the primitive, pugnacious warfare deformed the land.
War was all humans knew. Violence was the answer.
‘Sir, the troops have been gathered!’ bleated the general. ‘For too long have these loitering civilians disrupted our plans of world despotism. For too long have these rootless nomads stolen our entertainment… our pets, the humans.’
‘It’s time to act… and act we will.’
A rambunctious explosion ran through the hearts of the nearby prestidigitators. Shockwaves surged through the dilapidated city. Any remaining humans were immediately vitiated. Time slowed down. From the pinnacle of the golden fortress, hysterical susurrations drifted to the demising corpses.
The battle was over.
The llamas had won.
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Kevin Hughes
07/18/2018Jd said it all. Many of us Writer/Readers have a fairly well developed robust vocabulary- yours, young person, is beyond that. It is stunningly close to Aldous Huxely, or in my country: Buckminster Fuller, or David Frost from days of old. Big words can make you sound pedantic or purposely obtuse, in your case, they just sound delightful. Smiles, Kevin
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JD
07/15/2018What an amazingly advanced use of vocabulary, Alice! And an interesting and well-written story, too, so not just big words for the sake of using big words, but well considered words which enhance your tale and take it to another level. Outstanding story telling and writing. Thank you for sharing your science fiction scary story on Storystar, and congratulations on being selected as one of the Short Story STARS of the Week! : )
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