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- Story Listed as: Fiction For Kids
- Theme: Science Fiction
- Subject: Science / Science Fiction
- Published: 04/11/2018
SCORGE
Aria Brennan
In the dimension of Scorge people fight to their death and couches finally get the revenge and sit on you!
In cinemas as soon as I finish publishing the book!
Chapter 1
The last thing you’d expect to find during detention is a passage way to another dimension…………………………
‘Auuuuuuugg! I hate having detention, especially in classroom 27. It’s the one classroom that never gets cleaned, with the smelly desks and the wooden chairs that have splinters that drive up your bum!’ Hayley moans while getting out her homework, ‘how about you?’
‘I hate it too,’ Her friend Kaitlin replies. ‘I mean they already put us through all that torture during the week, you post one thing on Instagram and you have to come to school on the weekend as well.’
Ding, Hayley had a lightbulb moment. ‘Hey, why don’t we climb through the vent so we can get out of this dump, I mean we are the only ones in here and the security cameras only work during the week day!’ she says with enthusiasm.
‘Okay, but if I get into trouble for this you have to take full responsibility. okay!’ Kaitlin says.
‘Okay,’ Hayley answers.
Chapter 2
‘Hey, can you give me a lift,’ Hayley asks
‘Sure, why not?’ Kaitlin replays.
‘Do not drop me!’ Hayley says with Frustration
‘I won’t,’ Kaitlin replays,
Hayley gets up and into the vent fine ‘hey Kaitlin, It’s really dark in here and pretty creepy, I’ll get you up so we can go’ She mentions. She reaches her hand out ready to pull Kaitlin up until ‘aaaaaahhh!’ a gush of wind comes past and takes Hayley away with loud crashes and bumps.
She wakes 3 days later, or so it says on her watch, with some bumps and bruises in what looks to be a different world or some time of different dimension….. but that’s not possible because that kind of thing only exists in science fiction movies. Then where am I, She wonders to herself…..
suddenly a voice boomed from above ‘you are in the dimension of Scorge named after me, Scorge the greatest super villain, with all my army of nazi zombies and butt couches that seriously have butts to sit on you with! Ha ha ha’ Scorge laughs wickedly.
‘Ha ha, good joke, well I better wake up from this crazy, crazy dream’ Hayley says, with her silver blue hair brushing against her bloody nosed face.
‘Oh no, you’re not in a dream, I’ll pinch you if you want me to prove it,’ Scorge offers.
‘No thanks really, I believe you, but then where do I sleep, rest or even shower’ Hayley says with confusion.
‘Oh yes, but first you have to earn your hut, yes earn it…. In the games of war. Well what you do is…..you go into war for the longest time needed and fight against the toughest of tough in the island of termination’ Scorge says.
‘WHAT, you have to be kidding me!’ She screeches.
‘And when you are there you will fight people who have been training for this their whole life, fifteen will go but only one will come out alive!’ Scorge declares.
Chapter 3
‘Are you sure this is necessary, I can just not shower at all if you want,’ she asks.
‘No no no no no, this is entertaining watching you get killed, don’t worry, if they torture you too much all you need to think about is the rest you’ll get five seconds later when you’re dead.’
He laughs while he does that horrible smile that you can see his yellow and rotten teeth!
She walks forward with caution watching her opponents with their huge Weapons and their faces looking mean and cruel. Hayley walked two steps forward. Her opponents growl at her while she shakes in fear. Scorge is laughing while spilling the rainbow popcorn all over his green, fat and ugly body!
‘Let the games begin!’ Yells Scorge.
Chapter 4
‘I wake with a concussion four days later, surprisingly not dead and on the highest of trees and with the fourteen other people,
‘Wait what are you doing here, I’m not gonna die am I?’ She asks with a frightened tone
‘No, we have all decided to team up and finally defeat that fat and horrible Scorge, what do you say’ declared one of her opponents
‘I’m in….. as long as you don’t kill me in the process,’ she made clear
‘We’re not going to kill you, okay. Now this is the plan………………’ the one with the white blonde hair and ripped army clothes says.
Chapter 5
‘Okay we all know the plan right, right so let’s do this, 3,2,1 GO!’ Hayley yells with a little confusion.
They run with their weapons charging at Scorge.
‘no no no, nobody can defeat the great and powerful Scorge. BUTT COUCHES CHARGE!, NAZI ZOMBIES CHARGE!’ He says with an exited tone.
‘Ouch, ouch, OUCH’ comes from all of the components while The couches use their butts to sit on them and the nazi zombies eat their arms.
‘Well if you think that is all we got, you’re right, just go put us in jail. We’re not gonna fight for something that is impossible for us to get.’ Hayley says with disappointment.
Chapter 6
So now that they are at SCORGE JAIL, Hayley told them about her plan to bust out of it, and then they will come to live with her on earth. they all loved the idea but were very unsure if it would work. The only thing they had in Mind was that the worst thing that can happen is they will be in jail again.
‘You ready?’ Hayley asks
‘We’re ready’ the rest reply
They sneak around waiting for just the right moment until bam!
The toughest of them all did a back kick with a twist and opened the titanium gate, once stopping them from going to the outside world. They all run out into the night sky but still can’t find the portal to get to Earth.
‘There it is, the portal’ Hayley yells
They run charging for the portal and jump in, head first
Zzzzzzzooooooooooooooooooooop!
Chapter 7
‘Yay! Oh it’s earth, sweet sweet earth’ Hayley says while kissing the dirty, blackened floor of classroom 27.
Hayley got back with her friend and the other fourteen learnt the ways of earth with still a few problems, but it’s a work in progress. They are going to school with Hayley and Kaitlin.
They have finally changed their style (from army clothes) and are now finally wearing clothes that a normal teenager would wear.
Although it is hard for them to keep the secret of Scorge, there was some fun times and I know that they will think it is worth keeping secret.
Scourge(Bella)
SCORGE
Aria Brennan
In the dimension of Scorge people fight to their death and couches finally get the revenge and sit on you!
In cinemas as soon as I finish publishing the book!
Chapter 1
The last thing you’d expect to find during detention is a passage way to another dimension…………………………
‘Auuuuuuugg! I hate having detention, especially in classroom 27. It’s the one classroom that never gets cleaned, with the smelly desks and the wooden chairs that have splinters that drive up your bum!’ Hayley moans while getting out her homework, ‘how about you?’
‘I hate it too,’ Her friend Kaitlin replies. ‘I mean they already put us through all that torture during the week, you post one thing on Instagram and you have to come to school on the weekend as well.’
Ding, Hayley had a lightbulb moment. ‘Hey, why don’t we climb through the vent so we can get out of this dump, I mean we are the only ones in here and the security cameras only work during the week day!’ she says with enthusiasm.
‘Okay, but if I get into trouble for this you have to take full responsibility. okay!’ Kaitlin says.
‘Okay,’ Hayley answers.
Chapter 2
‘Hey, can you give me a lift,’ Hayley asks
‘Sure, why not?’ Kaitlin replays.
‘Do not drop me!’ Hayley says with Frustration
‘I won’t,’ Kaitlin replays,
Hayley gets up and into the vent fine ‘hey Kaitlin, It’s really dark in here and pretty creepy, I’ll get you up so we can go’ She mentions. She reaches her hand out ready to pull Kaitlin up until ‘aaaaaahhh!’ a gush of wind comes past and takes Hayley away with loud crashes and bumps.
She wakes 3 days later, or so it says on her watch, with some bumps and bruises in what looks to be a different world or some time of different dimension….. but that’s not possible because that kind of thing only exists in science fiction movies. Then where am I, She wonders to herself…..
suddenly a voice boomed from above ‘you are in the dimension of Scorge named after me, Scorge the greatest super villain, with all my army of nazi zombies and butt couches that seriously have butts to sit on you with! Ha ha ha’ Scorge laughs wickedly.
‘Ha ha, good joke, well I better wake up from this crazy, crazy dream’ Hayley says, with her silver blue hair brushing against her bloody nosed face.
‘Oh no, you’re not in a dream, I’ll pinch you if you want me to prove it,’ Scorge offers.
‘No thanks really, I believe you, but then where do I sleep, rest or even shower’ Hayley says with confusion.
‘Oh yes, but first you have to earn your hut, yes earn it…. In the games of war. Well what you do is…..you go into war for the longest time needed and fight against the toughest of tough in the island of termination’ Scorge says.
‘WHAT, you have to be kidding me!’ She screeches.
‘And when you are there you will fight people who have been training for this their whole life, fifteen will go but only one will come out alive!’ Scorge declares.
Chapter 3
‘Are you sure this is necessary, I can just not shower at all if you want,’ she asks.
‘No no no no no, this is entertaining watching you get killed, don’t worry, if they torture you too much all you need to think about is the rest you’ll get five seconds later when you’re dead.’
He laughs while he does that horrible smile that you can see his yellow and rotten teeth!
She walks forward with caution watching her opponents with their huge Weapons and their faces looking mean and cruel. Hayley walked two steps forward. Her opponents growl at her while she shakes in fear. Scorge is laughing while spilling the rainbow popcorn all over his green, fat and ugly body!
‘Let the games begin!’ Yells Scorge.
Chapter 4
‘I wake with a concussion four days later, surprisingly not dead and on the highest of trees and with the fourteen other people,
‘Wait what are you doing here, I’m not gonna die am I?’ She asks with a frightened tone
‘No, we have all decided to team up and finally defeat that fat and horrible Scorge, what do you say’ declared one of her opponents
‘I’m in….. as long as you don’t kill me in the process,’ she made clear
‘We’re not going to kill you, okay. Now this is the plan………………’ the one with the white blonde hair and ripped army clothes says.
Chapter 5
‘Okay we all know the plan right, right so let’s do this, 3,2,1 GO!’ Hayley yells with a little confusion.
They run with their weapons charging at Scorge.
‘no no no, nobody can defeat the great and powerful Scorge. BUTT COUCHES CHARGE!, NAZI ZOMBIES CHARGE!’ He says with an exited tone.
‘Ouch, ouch, OUCH’ comes from all of the components while The couches use their butts to sit on them and the nazi zombies eat their arms.
‘Well if you think that is all we got, you’re right, just go put us in jail. We’re not gonna fight for something that is impossible for us to get.’ Hayley says with disappointment.
Chapter 6
So now that they are at SCORGE JAIL, Hayley told them about her plan to bust out of it, and then they will come to live with her on earth. they all loved the idea but were very unsure if it would work. The only thing they had in Mind was that the worst thing that can happen is they will be in jail again.
‘You ready?’ Hayley asks
‘We’re ready’ the rest reply
They sneak around waiting for just the right moment until bam!
The toughest of them all did a back kick with a twist and opened the titanium gate, once stopping them from going to the outside world. They all run out into the night sky but still can’t find the portal to get to Earth.
‘There it is, the portal’ Hayley yells
They run charging for the portal and jump in, head first
Zzzzzzzooooooooooooooooooooop!
Chapter 7
‘Yay! Oh it’s earth, sweet sweet earth’ Hayley says while kissing the dirty, blackened floor of classroom 27.
Hayley got back with her friend and the other fourteen learnt the ways of earth with still a few problems, but it’s a work in progress. They are going to school with Hayley and Kaitlin.
They have finally changed their style (from army clothes) and are now finally wearing clothes that a normal teenager would wear.
Although it is hard for them to keep the secret of Scorge, there was some fun times and I know that they will think it is worth keeping secret.
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