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- Story Listed as: Fiction For Teens
- Theme: Mystery
- Subject: Horror / Scary
- Published: 06/12/2015
![The Unborn](/storage/story/1434230030the grl-image(238x285-crop).jpg)
It was a hot summer, like no other in Dantaylia, a small town with a population of 665. Most people don't visit the small town because of rumours of dark magic. They say there are witches in Dalia Forest that have killed and eaten a young boy named Christopher and his older sister Lilac. But the townspeople believe the rumours aren't true because there isn't any evidence of dead bodies in Dalia Forest, nor is there a Dalia Forest. There is only a forest with a sign named The Dalil Forest. One night there was a loud shriek echoing of a young woman coming from inside of The Dalil Forest. The scream woke up almost the whole town and soon the local police were called to investigate the noise coming from the dark forest. Once they arrived to the forest they decided to spread out and delved into the forest. Minutes of being inside, there is a loud thud like something huge has fallen over. So then two of the seven policeman decide to go and investigate for themselves about the loud sound. In the mist they see a dark shadow on the ground that seems to be a chunky fellow officer passed out. Rodin and Blage, the two officers, get their flash lights out and search around for anything suspicious. Soon they see the most horrid scene ever,it was a young woman with long red hair hanging from a tree. Her eyes had rolled to the back of her head, with tears of blood strolling down her face. Her mouth was gaped open from her whole jaw being cut off. Her body seemed malnourished and white as snow. The noose was tightly wrapped around her neck with dark bruises lining her neck. Suddenly the body was shaking violently in front of the officers. The two officers quickly called the others and help take down the body. Paramedics soon came to take away the body, and the young woman was hospitalized immediately. The hospital finds out later the young woman named Annabelle was an elementary school teacher who had vanished after finding out she was pregnant. Nurses checked her body to find a large scar, which was later examined, doctors have found out her entire uterus was taken out. Two days later the young woman vanished from the hospital. Townspeople were searching everywhere for her but no luck. A local detective investigated the case of the woman and the forest. He went in the afternoon to look around the tree that the woman hanged from. He looked closely and saw the carving on the tree which read "Annabelle you should have listened to us" with a heart. Later after not seeing any other evidence the detective returned from the forest to then notice the sign changed. Instead of "The Dalil Forest", the "L" was somehow erased and an "A" was put so it then read " The Dalia Forest". The next day rolled around and the detective was found stabbed 20 times all over the body in his home with his entire jaw missing. People were panicking and rumours are spreading around. Soon people were leaving the town and the population went down to 266. No one dared to even be near the eerie forests. During the night there were constant moans and screams but the people couldn't call help because the entire police force left and retired. Soon the town was deserted. They say if you visit The Dalil Forest at night you will never return for the witches will come and get you no matter man, woman, or child. They say you will hear moans and even see Annabelle and her unborn child. They say the witches will turn your skin inside out if you double cross them and your body will be bonded with one of the trees in the forest. Many say these things but no one has confirmed it from being able to come back from the forest. No one.
The End
The Unborn(Alina Florestal)
It was a hot summer, like no other in Dantaylia, a small town with a population of 665. Most people don't visit the small town because of rumours of dark magic. They say there are witches in Dalia Forest that have killed and eaten a young boy named Christopher and his older sister Lilac. But the townspeople believe the rumours aren't true because there isn't any evidence of dead bodies in Dalia Forest, nor is there a Dalia Forest. There is only a forest with a sign named The Dalil Forest. One night there was a loud shriek echoing of a young woman coming from inside of The Dalil Forest. The scream woke up almost the whole town and soon the local police were called to investigate the noise coming from the dark forest. Once they arrived to the forest they decided to spread out and delved into the forest. Minutes of being inside, there is a loud thud like something huge has fallen over. So then two of the seven policeman decide to go and investigate for themselves about the loud sound. In the mist they see a dark shadow on the ground that seems to be a chunky fellow officer passed out. Rodin and Blage, the two officers, get their flash lights out and search around for anything suspicious. Soon they see the most horrid scene ever,it was a young woman with long red hair hanging from a tree. Her eyes had rolled to the back of her head, with tears of blood strolling down her face. Her mouth was gaped open from her whole jaw being cut off. Her body seemed malnourished and white as snow. The noose was tightly wrapped around her neck with dark bruises lining her neck. Suddenly the body was shaking violently in front of the officers. The two officers quickly called the others and help take down the body. Paramedics soon came to take away the body, and the young woman was hospitalized immediately. The hospital finds out later the young woman named Annabelle was an elementary school teacher who had vanished after finding out she was pregnant. Nurses checked her body to find a large scar, which was later examined, doctors have found out her entire uterus was taken out. Two days later the young woman vanished from the hospital. Townspeople were searching everywhere for her but no luck. A local detective investigated the case of the woman and the forest. He went in the afternoon to look around the tree that the woman hanged from. He looked closely and saw the carving on the tree which read "Annabelle you should have listened to us" with a heart. Later after not seeing any other evidence the detective returned from the forest to then notice the sign changed. Instead of "The Dalil Forest", the "L" was somehow erased and an "A" was put so it then read " The Dalia Forest". The next day rolled around and the detective was found stabbed 20 times all over the body in his home with his entire jaw missing. People were panicking and rumours are spreading around. Soon people were leaving the town and the population went down to 266. No one dared to even be near the eerie forests. During the night there were constant moans and screams but the people couldn't call help because the entire police force left and retired. Soon the town was deserted. They say if you visit The Dalil Forest at night you will never return for the witches will come and get you no matter man, woman, or child. They say you will hear moans and even see Annabelle and her unborn child. They say the witches will turn your skin inside out if you double cross them and your body will be bonded with one of the trees in the forest. Many say these things but no one has confirmed it from being able to come back from the forest. No one.
The End
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