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- Story Listed as: Fiction For Teens
- Theme: Fairy Tales & Fantasy
- Subject: Fairy Tale / Folk Tale
- Published: 06/03/2015
The mystery moon night
Born 1999, M, from Tamil Nadu, IndiaThe clock struck 10. I was walking alone in the streets of Bakeshire. It was full of water after a great downpour. I was walking in a very sad mood as I couldnt do justice to my life as I cant acheive anything greater. By the time I noticed some lusturous thing in the water . It was some sort of a jem . "Pull it" were the words that were engraved on the gem . I tried to do so but then the jem broke into half and it sucked me in . For a few minutes the clouds that were overcast became pitch black and nohing was visible to me except the black surroundings. Just then I saw something unbeleivable !! I saw dried trees and leaves and injured animals and the land was like it got affected by a great disaster.
Just then I was trying to find my way out when I saw a hughe and gigantic tree and I had hollows on it's bark. It was so huge that I myself could fit into it. When I entered the hollow I was surprised to see that it was like a huge palace with all kinds of furnitures and foods but no one were inside it . Just then I heard a mysterious voice :
Voice : So you are the chosen one ? Me : Who are you and what are you talking about ? Voice : I happen to be the queen of this land . This land was equal to heaven with all kinds of flowers blooming over here and the land would would have variety of unicorns and animals. It was so enchanting that one might also feel dizzy after gazing this view.
Me : All right but what happened to this place ? Voice : Things turned upside down when my very own brother felt jealous about ruling this land and started to prepare his very own army and finally cursed that this very land would suffer from many difficulties until a person steps forward to kill me !
Me : Am I in a kind of Fantasy world or something ? Voice : No ! Absolutely not ! This happens to be the real one and the world you live in is a fake one ! Every year we try to send jems like this to find out the really brave person ! Me : So what hapened to the other people ?? Voice : Everybody who accepted the challenge and went never came back ...
I had a little bit of fear inside me but the spark inside me to acheive something great destroyed my fear. So I was ready to take up my journey ...
I was told by the voice that there are totally three regional demons and finally if you beat them they would give you a clue to reach my brother so that you could kill him but you need to perform various things to beat them. At first you have to meet a Centuar , and then a Minatour and Mr. MJ and finally my brother . Centuar's location is several miles away from here and as a queen it is my duty to present the hero who is going to save my land and take this note , pen and a cycle and finally my favourite dog Jimmy .
After reaching several miles I heard a great sound and when I rushed to the place I saw a huge rock with the words "Beware of red clothes" engraved in it . Suddenly a Minatour came smashing the rocks . I thought that Centuar would be the first demon . But due to some reasons they have swapped their places. I was thinking how to defeat the Minatour because it was so bulky that I couldn't even match with it. Suddenly I remeber the clue which was written on the rock . So I took a red cloth which was lying near me and was full of dried blood that indicates that many people have fought it before me but they failed to defeat it . Finally I kept the red cloth infront of a huge rock as the professionals in Pega do . It feircefully came and hit the rock instead of hitting the cloth and it dashed itself and fainted but his last words were :
" Up into the cherry tree Who should climb but little me I held the trunk with both my hands Looking upon the foreign lands "
According to me it indicates that the Centaur lives somewhere up the mountains where it challenged me to a game of Javelin . After a great game and many attempts I finally managed to defeat it . It then gave me the clue for Mr. MJ . It told me those chaotic words "Swite Why CD ?" Before I could ask what was that it disappeared then I used the notes and the pen that the queen gave me to analyze and crack the code. It was so useful that I finally cracked it . It actually was "SYTYCD that means So You Think You Could Dance .." It was a wonderful and bitter experience and I couldn't beleive that I myself cracked it . And the coincidence is that he happens to be Mr. MJ that is Michael Jackson but not the real one I beleive. When I went to a club where he was dancing , he challenged me to a dance competition . Finally at last I beat him and got my next clue . He told me that :
" He is the greatest demon He isnt afraid for anything but more than a lemon A newly arrived place called Ruhog .. He is only afraid of d--d---d--"
Before completing it he disappeared. This made my journey a little bit tougher . Finally I found out that it has a rhyming scheme that is ruhog and dog are almost rhyming and I also thought why could a great queen give her favourite dog although she knows that I am going to die ?? I was pretty sure that my only weapon to beat him was the dog but I didnt want ot reveal that I knew it and I wanted to use it as a secret weapon . After a devastating battle he almost killed me but now time has come to use my weapon and I used my dog to bark at him and finally he accepted his and told that he would leave the land free forever.
When I completed my quest I was teleported back to the queen's place after a huge discussion I remeber only a few questions that I asked to her and some of them were :
1) Why would such a huge be afraid of a little dog and 2) Why are you always talking from nowhere instead of showing up yourself?
The voice replied " When he was a child a dog suddenly came and bit him and he had to undergo many painful treatments to escape for the disease and so since his childhood he is really afraid of dogs". And for my another one the queen finally came out and showed her face to me . And she took me outside of her place so that I could experience the lovliness of her place. It was an amazing experience. And so now at last everything was back to normal and I was teleported back to the normal world .
And at last I was satisfied that I did some justice to my life. This thing, that is my new vedio game swept the country by millions and millions but when time went off everybody started to get bored off seeing my game and finally my company went in a huge loss. When I was walking in the streets at night I saw the same gem that I saw in my own vedio game. Then when a gusto I pulled it to start my journey off.
And this is how a man's vedio game story comes true in his real life !!!!!
THE END
The mystery moon night(Tarakeshwar S Davay)
The clock struck 10. I was walking alone in the streets of Bakeshire. It was full of water after a great downpour. I was walking in a very sad mood as I couldnt do justice to my life as I cant acheive anything greater. By the time I noticed some lusturous thing in the water . It was some sort of a jem . "Pull it" were the words that were engraved on the gem . I tried to do so but then the jem broke into half and it sucked me in . For a few minutes the clouds that were overcast became pitch black and nohing was visible to me except the black surroundings. Just then I saw something unbeleivable !! I saw dried trees and leaves and injured animals and the land was like it got affected by a great disaster.
Just then I was trying to find my way out when I saw a hughe and gigantic tree and I had hollows on it's bark. It was so huge that I myself could fit into it. When I entered the hollow I was surprised to see that it was like a huge palace with all kinds of furnitures and foods but no one were inside it . Just then I heard a mysterious voice :
Voice : So you are the chosen one ? Me : Who are you and what are you talking about ? Voice : I happen to be the queen of this land . This land was equal to heaven with all kinds of flowers blooming over here and the land would would have variety of unicorns and animals. It was so enchanting that one might also feel dizzy after gazing this view.
Me : All right but what happened to this place ? Voice : Things turned upside down when my very own brother felt jealous about ruling this land and started to prepare his very own army and finally cursed that this very land would suffer from many difficulties until a person steps forward to kill me !
Me : Am I in a kind of Fantasy world or something ? Voice : No ! Absolutely not ! This happens to be the real one and the world you live in is a fake one ! Every year we try to send jems like this to find out the really brave person ! Me : So what hapened to the other people ?? Voice : Everybody who accepted the challenge and went never came back ...
I had a little bit of fear inside me but the spark inside me to acheive something great destroyed my fear. So I was ready to take up my journey ...
I was told by the voice that there are totally three regional demons and finally if you beat them they would give you a clue to reach my brother so that you could kill him but you need to perform various things to beat them. At first you have to meet a Centuar , and then a Minatour and Mr. MJ and finally my brother . Centuar's location is several miles away from here and as a queen it is my duty to present the hero who is going to save my land and take this note , pen and a cycle and finally my favourite dog Jimmy .
After reaching several miles I heard a great sound and when I rushed to the place I saw a huge rock with the words "Beware of red clothes" engraved in it . Suddenly a Minatour came smashing the rocks . I thought that Centuar would be the first demon . But due to some reasons they have swapped their places. I was thinking how to defeat the Minatour because it was so bulky that I couldn't even match with it. Suddenly I remeber the clue which was written on the rock . So I took a red cloth which was lying near me and was full of dried blood that indicates that many people have fought it before me but they failed to defeat it . Finally I kept the red cloth infront of a huge rock as the professionals in Pega do . It feircefully came and hit the rock instead of hitting the cloth and it dashed itself and fainted but his last words were :
" Up into the cherry tree Who should climb but little me I held the trunk with both my hands Looking upon the foreign lands "
According to me it indicates that the Centaur lives somewhere up the mountains where it challenged me to a game of Javelin . After a great game and many attempts I finally managed to defeat it . It then gave me the clue for Mr. MJ . It told me those chaotic words "Swite Why CD ?" Before I could ask what was that it disappeared then I used the notes and the pen that the queen gave me to analyze and crack the code. It was so useful that I finally cracked it . It actually was "SYTYCD that means So You Think You Could Dance .." It was a wonderful and bitter experience and I couldn't beleive that I myself cracked it . And the coincidence is that he happens to be Mr. MJ that is Michael Jackson but not the real one I beleive. When I went to a club where he was dancing , he challenged me to a dance competition . Finally at last I beat him and got my next clue . He told me that :
" He is the greatest demon He isnt afraid for anything but more than a lemon A newly arrived place called Ruhog .. He is only afraid of d--d---d--"
Before completing it he disappeared. This made my journey a little bit tougher . Finally I found out that it has a rhyming scheme that is ruhog and dog are almost rhyming and I also thought why could a great queen give her favourite dog although she knows that I am going to die ?? I was pretty sure that my only weapon to beat him was the dog but I didnt want ot reveal that I knew it and I wanted to use it as a secret weapon . After a devastating battle he almost killed me but now time has come to use my weapon and I used my dog to bark at him and finally he accepted his and told that he would leave the land free forever.
When I completed my quest I was teleported back to the queen's place after a huge discussion I remeber only a few questions that I asked to her and some of them were :
1) Why would such a huge be afraid of a little dog and 2) Why are you always talking from nowhere instead of showing up yourself?
The voice replied " When he was a child a dog suddenly came and bit him and he had to undergo many painful treatments to escape for the disease and so since his childhood he is really afraid of dogs". And for my another one the queen finally came out and showed her face to me . And she took me outside of her place so that I could experience the lovliness of her place. It was an amazing experience. And so now at last everything was back to normal and I was teleported back to the normal world .
And at last I was satisfied that I did some justice to my life. This thing, that is my new vedio game swept the country by millions and millions but when time went off everybody started to get bored off seeing my game and finally my company went in a huge loss. When I was walking in the streets at night I saw the same gem that I saw in my own vedio game. Then when a gusto I pulled it to start my journey off.
And this is how a man's vedio game story comes true in his real life !!!!!
THE END
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