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- Story Listed as: Fiction For Teens
- Theme: Mystery
- Subject: Character Based
- Published: 05/24/2015
chapter I - i don't understand
-i wake up in a hospital bed, confused, not remembering what happend, the smell of the dead flowers on a old wooden desk next to my bed is completly reconosable.
i sit up, feeling my head slight headed. i try to remember
what happend, the only thing i remember is walking home from school.
i desmount myself from the bed feeling how my bare feet feel the coldness of the floor. i see my clothes hanging in aconner closet and on the foorl i see my shoes
i go ahead and grab them and put them on.
i then hear out of my room a couple of females, i open the door to find a women standing in front of the door, she was blond, blue eyes white skined and tall
- i see you finally woke up
- what happend to me?
- i don't know
- well who broght me here?
she didn't say a word
- ma'am can you please tell me i, i am seriuosly freaked out at the moment
at that moment two nurse go running pass us, i see they enter room 221. when they open the door i hear a man screaming for his life.
-please don't kill me! please don't kill me!
i found it strange how his voice just broke in out of silence, but i didn't give it mind
i looked back at the nurse again begging her to tell me who broght me, or what happend to me but she wouldn't say a word
i then remembered my cellphone. i ran back into the room to get my cellphone, when i run back in i see everything neat as like i was never there, the bed was set
neat and look cleanedthe flowers were no longer there. everything was just normal. i then worried about retreaving me cellphone
after a while of looking i didn't seem to find it, to after memember i did not take it to school that morning. walking out of the room i notice that the women had
left, no carring since she wasn't of much help, i ran thrugh the long hallway that looked endless in this creepy hospital, the floor tiles looked old and dirty and
were missing pieces, the wall had a fainting red color that looked old and dirty as well, the ceiling had filtrations and look like at any moment it was going to
come down not to mention the smell of sickness.
i finally find a phonebooth and call home, it rings and rings but no one picks up, i call twice to see if they were sleeping the ring would wake them up but nothing.
luckly i remember my moms cellphone number since the day she got the number i was there with her. i dial her number out of luck the operator tells me to check the
number and dail again as if the number was wrong. strange enough i decide not to believe it and dail again but i get the same operating message.
i then forget about the phonebooth and try to make my way out of the hospital, i head stright to the stairs knowing i was on the 3 floor of the hospital because
my dad worked here as a urolagist on the first floor. finally on the first floor i see the exit to the out world i. i ran into the doors pushing with my body.
finally outside i take a deep inhale, it felt so good, like if my loungs expanded for the first time, like if it was the first time my loungs felt air in my life.
second life(night)
chapter I - i don't understand
-i wake up in a hospital bed, confused, not remembering what happend, the smell of the dead flowers on a old wooden desk next to my bed is completly reconosable.
i sit up, feeling my head slight headed. i try to remember
what happend, the only thing i remember is walking home from school.
i desmount myself from the bed feeling how my bare feet feel the coldness of the floor. i see my clothes hanging in aconner closet and on the foorl i see my shoes
i go ahead and grab them and put them on.
i then hear out of my room a couple of females, i open the door to find a women standing in front of the door, she was blond, blue eyes white skined and tall
- i see you finally woke up
- what happend to me?
- i don't know
- well who broght me here?
she didn't say a word
- ma'am can you please tell me i, i am seriuosly freaked out at the moment
at that moment two nurse go running pass us, i see they enter room 221. when they open the door i hear a man screaming for his life.
-please don't kill me! please don't kill me!
i found it strange how his voice just broke in out of silence, but i didn't give it mind
i looked back at the nurse again begging her to tell me who broght me, or what happend to me but she wouldn't say a word
i then remembered my cellphone. i ran back into the room to get my cellphone, when i run back in i see everything neat as like i was never there, the bed was set
neat and look cleanedthe flowers were no longer there. everything was just normal. i then worried about retreaving me cellphone
after a while of looking i didn't seem to find it, to after memember i did not take it to school that morning. walking out of the room i notice that the women had
left, no carring since she wasn't of much help, i ran thrugh the long hallway that looked endless in this creepy hospital, the floor tiles looked old and dirty and
were missing pieces, the wall had a fainting red color that looked old and dirty as well, the ceiling had filtrations and look like at any moment it was going to
come down not to mention the smell of sickness.
i finally find a phonebooth and call home, it rings and rings but no one picks up, i call twice to see if they were sleeping the ring would wake them up but nothing.
luckly i remember my moms cellphone number since the day she got the number i was there with her. i dial her number out of luck the operator tells me to check the
number and dail again as if the number was wrong. strange enough i decide not to believe it and dail again but i get the same operating message.
i then forget about the phonebooth and try to make my way out of the hospital, i head stright to the stairs knowing i was on the 3 floor of the hospital because
my dad worked here as a urolagist on the first floor. finally on the first floor i see the exit to the out world i. i ran into the doors pushing with my body.
finally outside i take a deep inhale, it felt so good, like if my loungs expanded for the first time, like if it was the first time my loungs felt air in my life.
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